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Post by blueseawaves on Oct 16, 2024 17:32:47 GMT
Enjoyed how ominous the start was. lol at that bit of Blodeuwedd.
Lucius not being able to use his phone but being able to use the machine is spot on with some older people I work with 😭 Felt like Molly before just watching😆 Now good luck with the suits Molly!
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Post by luciusstorm on Oct 16, 2024 17:50:06 GMT
blueseawaves, glad you liked it. Ah Lucius, casually name-dropping mythological figures he knows personally.  I enjoy writing him. He's this strange mixture of bizarre and practical.
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Post by ellupelluellu on Oct 16, 2024 19:51:17 GMT
My eyes still giving me troubles, plus I am in flu.. So I have nothing smart to say ((if I ever have XD) , but very interesting chapter, now I wish to know what he found  Agreeing with BlueSeaWaves , lol at Blodeuwedd  |
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Post by luciusstorm on Oct 16, 2024 21:18:33 GMT
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Post by danirose on Oct 16, 2024 22:20:28 GMT
Awesome chapter. 😃 Every chapter reveals even more surprises with Lucius. It's easy to imagine how bewildered Molly must feel.
I won't lie, I had to google Blodeuwedd.😁
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Post by luciusstorm on Oct 16, 2024 22:36:05 GMT
danirose, glad you enjoyed it. That's why we have Google. Lucius, despite his current name, is far more Celtic than he is Greco-Roman or Norse. Welsh mythology is a bit out of the mainstream, but I enjoy it.
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Post by luciusstorm on Oct 18, 2024 11:10:14 GMT
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Post by ellupelluellu on Oct 18, 2024 14:43:14 GMT
From Kenobi to Merlin Major Duchovny??? Is there Major Anderson too? XD I am very curious what Lucius is going to say next |
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Post by luciusstorm on Oct 18, 2024 14:50:32 GMT
I love their banter. The truth is out there... behind the big doors. |
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Post by Caerfinon on Oct 18, 2024 15:22:10 GMT
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Post by luciusstorm on Oct 18, 2024 15:28:19 GMT
Caerfinon, honestly, I think this whole chapter is kinda here to build the tension before the big reveal. Glad it works.
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Post by MonaSolstraale on Oct 18, 2024 20:55:11 GMT
Even though I know the whole story, it's hard not to be taken in by your storytelling skills. The fascination is hidden in the details, from the funny nicknames to the pictorial descriptions of scents and feelings. I love this phrase: Psychic sensitivity of a brick, Molly thought, but a great imagination. 😂🥰 PS: I wonder how you managed to acquire two hazmat suits? In my game I tried to get around the missing protective suits a little creatively. This is my army ready to fight evil.😉 |
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Post by blueseawaves on Oct 18, 2024 20:58:33 GMT
I like Merlin 😆 Great reactions at the end, Lucius was calm accepting what he thought it would be, and the opposite for Molly. Looking forward to the next one😃
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Post by luciusstorm on Oct 18, 2024 21:46:13 GMT
MonaSolstraale, high praise. Thank you. I wondered if I would be able to successfully put my own spin on the Strangerville story. It's nice to know I've done well so far. One of the things I love about Molly, in a world where most of my main characters are supernatural, deeply tragic or both, Molly is essentially an ordinary person. As for the two hazmat suits, it's probably because, game-play wise, I've been running both Molly and Lucius through the Strangerville aspiration in parallel. So, they each just bought their own hazmat suit... but that didn't make as good a story as Molly upgrading suits the lab had around. The little hoops we have to jump through. I like your team... very good outfits. I think Molly and certainly Lucius would have preferred those. blueseawaves, yeah, I loved their reactions at the end. One of those gifts the game gives from time to time. I look forward to hearing what you think of the next one. (Sometimes I hate this schedule I put myself on... but I need the structure of it.)
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Post by danirose on Oct 18, 2024 22:34:12 GMT
When I read the last line I thought of Egon's line from Ghostbusters, "I'm sorry, Venkman. I'm terrified beyond the capacity for rational thought."
You're doing a great job of building the suspense. 🍿
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I enjoy writing him. He's this strange mixture of bizarre and practical.
Agreeing with BlueSeaWaves , lol at Blodeuwedd 
