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Post by luciusstorm on Sept 11, 2024 11:17:50 GMT
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Post by danirose on Sept 11, 2024 20:13:51 GMT
A wonderful start to the latest story.
"With imperious distain." - Yep. That's a cat for you. ๐
The line about until her dying days has nice sense of mystery around it. I'm looking forward to where the story goes from here. ๐
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Post by luciusstorm on Sept 11, 2024 20:31:47 GMT
danirose, thank you. Huntress is many things, but she is first and foremost a cat.
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Post by blueseawaves on Sept 12, 2024 12:20:31 GMT
Wanted to comment yesterday but after work I was just drained๐ฃ Happy to see Molly is back, great title sheโs given Lucius too, of Luxurious hair indeed๐ Molly seems perfectly fine as independent, Meredith. Canโt wait to see your spin of the story ๐
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Post by luciusstorm on Sept 12, 2024 12:38:29 GMT
blueseawaves, no problem. Resting is important. I'm enjoying having Molly take center stage. We will see more of her interesting nicknames. While I love a good romance, I decided that Molly didn't need one. She's a strong, independent woman who likes people but is at a point in her life where she isn't with anyone. In real life, I've known too many people who feel that being in a relationship is a requirement and end up staying in bad relationships because of that. I know I'm writing a bestselling novel or anything but I wanted to showcase a female character who very much doesn't need to be in a romantic relationship with someone. Yes, she and Lucius will team up but since Molly's a lesbian and Lucius (despite his wonderful hair) is a guy, there's really no possibility of romance between them. (Wow, that was a long answer to a short comment, but it's one of those story elements that I gave a lot of thought to. )
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Post by MonaSolstraale on Sept 12, 2024 12:54:01 GMT
luciusstorm I was really happy to see your start on your Strangerville Story. I remember you wrote that you couldn't really figure out how to start. You have overcome that crisis I see ๐ I love that Molly calls the rental agent for Manicured Meredith and Lucius for, Lucius of the Luxurious Hair. It made me laugh ๐ It reminds me that I have participated in courses with many people, where during the name round we have been asked to name an animal that starts with the same first letter as our name. Like Mona mule (charming choice ๐
). It's a trick that makes it much easier to remember names. I hope that from now on I can manage two people from your personal gallery. I'm excited for what's to come.
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Post by luciusstorm on Sept 12, 2024 13:18:22 GMT
MonaSolstraale, sometimes my stories just flow, like they were already there, waiting to be written down. Other times, like this time, I need to work for the story. Still, I feel like it's coming along well despite, for maybe because of, that (touch wood). I struck on the idea of Molly giving everyone nicknames as a neat character quirk. I hadn't thought about why, but when you say it's a way to remember names it makes sense, given how Molly moves from place to place troubleshooting projects. Cool, I love it when I do something clever by accident.
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Post by blueseawaves on Sept 12, 2024 19:34:14 GMT
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Post by ellupelluellu on Sept 13, 2024 11:15:22 GMT
I hope this comment shows ok, typing it with phone. Anyway, great start, LOL at manicured and the luxurious hair Huntress is cute
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Post by luciusstorm on Sept 13, 2024 11:34:20 GMT
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Post by luciusstorm on Sept 13, 2024 11:37:33 GMT
I hope this comment shows ok, typing it with phone. Anyway, great start, LOL at manicured and the luxurious hair Huntress is cute Shows just fine. And in just in time. Huntress is a great cat. More fun nicknames to come.
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Post by ellupelluellu on Sept 13, 2024 11:48:03 GMT
I noticed more nicknames did arrive I am very curious and curioser for what happens next. Now I need to know all about the breakup at college.. tho I guess with who, but soap opera fan of me is needing to know.
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Post by luciusstorm on Sept 13, 2024 12:18:21 GMT
I noticed more nicknames did arrive I am very curious and curioser for what happens next. Now I need to know all about the breakup at college.. tho I guess with who, but soap opera fan of me is needing to know. Molly has had a life since we saw her in Raven's Apprentice. We'll be seeing all sorts of hints of it.
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Post by MonaSolstraale on Sept 13, 2024 14:22:56 GMT
I definitely noticed the nicknames too. I love them ๐๐ฅฐ
Exciting continuation of the story. It's always fun to see a new take on the Strangerville mystery. I have almost completed it twice and with a completely different process. It promises that you never quite know what is going to happen.
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Post by Caerfinon on Sept 13, 2024 15:22:50 GMT
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